RWS: ["Title" - flexible and "empty"
fluid - all like, as in near, the sacred holy TAO]
NW: {re Title: also the use of
INGOT a "bar of steel" and subtler still the "i" beam
of "god's eye" "jah" or "yod", or the great I AM- as in ad, "Got
God?"}
the crystalline substrata
RWS: [first line aleady attempts
movement and the integrity of charged particles
in
electrical alignmentunder vibrating plane - when
molecule align creating
"crystals they vibrate]
NW: {life can be metaphored as
a microchip of silicone crystal and the various
doping compounds - "silly complications - gated or ungated communities
of transistors,
resistors, capacitors and fleeting electrical charges}
the caravan o'er land
RWS: [linking the metaphor of a
desert trip through hostile territory
with growth of crystal lattice structures
on an inhospitable
or
non-bonding substrate]
NW: {crystal growth is progress
through time, look it up}
convinced in the cantata
outrageous sleight of hand
RWS: [the truth of movement...
by defining location in space, only thus can progress be measured]
NW: {this truth of position, can however
be deceptive}
an isolated follicle
a focal point of fame
the wet and dripping pine tree
we're carving in the rain
RWS: [the hair of the lady nuit
- each hair is a sacred point in motion-to find it=fame unity
flame & fame differ in only the L - the dripping gripping fur tree
(hare again-gone tomorrow)
drip carving in the loss, the reduction, the introduction of the void - in full fluid flow -
is carved
in rain - the flow add & seeks & falls to rebuild]
NW: {hair - point in space defined
in time - from the point within to the end where the flow drips off
the sacred pine - times erosion to entropy- expression of nothingness revealed
through
corrosive processes}
Leafing
RWS:[leaves like the hair falls
in time, a leaf a noun - leafing - the verb - its not static]
NW: {what's a leaf - solar catchers
mit that buds, blooms, blossoms and does its work
and falls to rise again}
hinged and hollow weed wand
hand held ingots, they'd been raised
RWS:[this wand is no dead stick-it grows-<hand
held> - guided and oppose gravity & thumbs]
NW: {holding raising "grasping
the inner god "<german GOTT>)
together sensing seeing brave
RWS:[attentiveness and dissolution
of opposites no fear, no against}
NW: {watching then doing}
TOO SOUTH
BIG MOUTH
NW: {watching what you say - don't
stray out of bounds}
RWS:[adjuration, don't say that
"low" thing]
a teacher taught one two trick three
where the others couldn't wouldn't be
but put the alone together ... then
the knowledge both can weave
RWS: [from learning new links are
made]
NW: {biographical only - mere sentimentality}
this when to weather
RWS: [from learning time changes
as the weather, or weather
is a time-bound phenomenon]
NW: {don't worry about the NOW
- its out the door yesterday - cryptic, nicht var}
conceiving the mischief of a belief thief
RWS:[pantheism, pure and simple-steals
from rich gods- gives to poor gods]
NW: {unlike peter, no rock, or
maybe better said "unrock" or the sacrilege that destroys belief}
they could
although to say they should isn't good
RWS: [principle of minding your
own business]
NW: {just a mad rhyme about motives,
and their slippery qualities}
TOGROW
like knowing
takes a throw or toss of WIN
and LOSS
RWS:[the risk at the bottom of
learning]
NW: {the crap shoot of evolution
and growth, nothing ventured nothing gained}
THEYDARE
SOME CARE
sharing air down here
RWS:[planetside mutuality of interests]
NW: {the mad rhymer again, but
something about daycare or caring about a day, might be hinted at}
buddy budding wonderloss... wanderlust...
RWS:[awareness on new friendship
and new nearer borders]
NW: {new beginnings after knowledge}
Chomping dust to be hollow hinged and feeding free
NW: {doing whatever it takes -
to be empty, flexible - nourished by all things}
RWS: [eat my dust - i'm headed
for sainthood or divinity - full throttle]
the crime mocking marking time
to say they say
RWS:[if you prognosticate your
perorations - will please few]
NW: {historians can only grasp
at shadows, look ahead}
"hollow hinged
as some of those rings, heavy things,
but
CLEAR
NW: {bent or flexible nothing -
might be philosophically powerful,
but at least it leaves no ponderous burden behind}
RWS: [so on the road of life, you may occasionally need,
your pooper scooper]
NW: {sure there is an earnest quality
to some of this stuff,
but does he really think this way - had to pay his asylum bills
clear, transparent, empty, flowing-open empty like the holy sacred tao}
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